DCCC is excited to introduce an online training course to take your English Business Writing skills to the next level. Register now to unlock your full potential in written communication.

DCCC推荐5月的这节在线培训课程，帮助您提升英文商务写作的技能。现在就报名，释放您书面沟通的全部潜力！

DATE & TIME日期时间

2024.5.22 9:00-16:00

VENUE地点

Online线上

LANGUAGE语言

Chines中文

PRICE价格

Member Ticket: RMB1380/Person

Group Ticket For 5(or more): RMB1300/Person

会员：1380元/人

团体（5人起)：1300元/人

Course Overview

Business writing is a critical skill for career success, whether you're a seasoned professional or just starting out. Our course equips you with the tools to excel in written communication, helping you make a lasting impression in the workplace.

What You'll Learn

1.Practical Principles: Discover effective business writing techniques that apply to real-world scenarios.

2.Simple Tools: Learn how to significantly enhance your writing using straightforward methods.

3.Structuring Excellence: Master organization, structure, and revision for clear and impactful communication.

Target Audience

This course is designed for all individuals seeking to improve their English business writing skills in their daily work. Whether you're a non-native English speaker, a seasoned executive, or a fresh recruit, this course is tailored to your needs.

Course Features

1. Sample Analysis and Discussion:

• Dive into real-world samples (both successful and unsuccessful) from emails and reports by employees of foreign-invested enterprises.
• Uncover key principles and factors for effective written communication through analysis and reflection.

2. Case Writing:

• Apply learned techniques through practical case writing.
• Engage with exercises and cases directly relevant to your work.

3. Evaluation and Feedback:

• Receive personalized feedback from our trainer.
• Get insights on language application, content, and logical structure.

4. Essence Absorption:

• Immerse yourself in hand-picked samples of excellent written communication.
• Absorb the essence and incorporate powerful phrases into your own language style.

COURSE OUTLINE

I. Make Your Language More Perfect

1. Daily Chinglish

2. Think in English

3. Common Grammar Mistakes

4. Modern English Expressions

5. KISS and Conjunctions

II. Motivational Language

1. Proactive language, emphasizing "What I can do"

2. Motivating the other party to take action tools: Using deadlines + appealing to the other party's interests

3. Professional business expressions do not use questions

III. Efficient Writing

1. How to define efficient writing

2. Using PDA for structuring - Purpose, Details, Action

3. Empathize with your reader

4. Customize for your reader - 7 customization guidelines

5. Make your email purpose clear, logical, and well-structured

IV. Apologies and Complaints

1. How to deal with rude people

2. How to handle apology and complaint emails

3. Do not use "sorry" lightly

4. You only need to use Sorry when you have really made a mistake

V. Practical Exercises

1. Analysis of actual email/report cases from students

2. Comprehensive exercise - Writing a letter to the general manager

3. Final gift - 20 tips for workplace writing

VI. Summary and Action Plan

TRAINER

Hei Hong Jie, Eddic Chief Lecturer

Certifications and Experience:

• DDI International Instructor Certification
• Worked in France, Australia, Germany, Japan, UAE, and other countries
• TEM level 8 in English
• President of AlmaTech Corporate University
• Winner of the "I am a good lecturer" competition in 2020
• Full-time lecturer at Gitzo Finance China
• Head of Training at Continental Automotive
• Training Manager at OTIS Elevator National Training Centre

Areas of Expertise:

• Over 18 years of experience in training and development
• Extensive knowledge in mechanical engineering, automotive electronics, finance, and electric vehicles
• Specializes in building corporate university systems, integrating corporate culture, organizational development, and employee growth
• Focuses on leadership development, combining psychology and advanced concepts to create effective leadership platforms

CANCELLATION

If you cannot attend an event for which you have registered, please cancel your registration no later than 3 business day prior to the event. If you fail to notify us of your cancellation in a timely fashion, you will be charged for the event costs.

ABOUT EDDIC

Eddic training center (china) is a leading provider of enterprise-level training services. Founded in 2003, eddic currently has more than 800 instructors who focus on enterprise-level training area. The company has served for more than 3,500 companies with professional customized training solutions. Adhering to the concept of "value-added courses and innovative services", eddic provides training solutions for enterprises to cultivate talents.

课程概述

无论是资深专业人士还是刚刚入行的新鲜人，商务写作都是职业成功的关键技能。本课程将介绍提高书面沟通所需的必要工具，帮您在职场上获得长久的优势。

1. 实用原则：探索适用于现实场景的有效商务写作技巧。
2. 简单工具：学习如何通过简单方法显著提高您的写作水平。
3. 构建卓越：精通组织、结构和修订，以实现清晰而有影响力的沟通。

目标学员

本课程适用于所有希望在日常工作中提高英语商务写作技能的个人。无论您是非英语母语的人、资深高管还是新入职的员工，本课程都将根据您的需求量身定制。

课程大纲

一、使你的语言更加完美

1.日常的中式英语

2.用英文的思维去思考

3.常见语法错误

4.现代英语表达

5.KISS和连接词

二、激励性语言

1.主动积极的语言，强调"我可以做什么"

2.激励对方采取行动工具：使用截止日期+对方的利益

3.专业的商务表达不使用问句

三、高效写作

1.如何定义高效写作

2.使用 PDA 进行结构化-Purpose，Details，Action

3.同理你的读者

4.为你的读者量身定做-七条定制准则

5.让邮件目的明确，条理清晰，结构合理\

四、道歉和投诉

1.如何处理粗鲁的人

2.如何处理道歉类及投诉类邮件

3.不要轻易使用"对不起"

4.你只有在真的做错的时候才需要使用Sorry

五、实战演练

1.学员实际邮件/报告案例分析

2.综合练习-【写给总经理的信】

3.最后的礼物-职场写作的20个贴士

六、总结与行动计划

培训讲师

黑宏杰 易迪思中国金牌讲师

资质和经验：

• DDI国际讲师认证
• 在法国、澳大利亚、德国、日本、阿联酋等国家工作经验
• 英语TEM 8级水平
• AlmaTech企业大学校长
• 2020年"我是优秀讲师"比赛获奖者
• Gitzo Finance China全职讲师
• Continental Automotive培训主管
• OTIS Elevator国家培训中心培训经理

专业领域：

• 在培训和发展领域拥有超过18年的经验
• 精通机械工程、汽车电子、金融和电动汽车领域
• 擅长构建企业大学体系，融入企业文化，组织发展和员工成长
• 关注领导力发展，将心理学和先进概念相结合，打造有效的领导平台

取消政策

如果您无法参加已注册的活动，请在活动开始前3个工作日内取消，否则活动费用不予以退还。

关于易迪思

易迪思(中国)培训中心是中国领先的企业级培训服务供应商，始创于2003年，目前机构 拥有超过800多位合作讲师，专注于企业级培训领域。目前总累计已为超过3500余家企业 提供定制化培训解决方案。易迪思结合 17余年培训服务的经验，针对企业的管理实际，不断总结，形成了独具特 色的培训课程体系和咨询辅导系统。并且与国内外优秀企业、机构交流合作，开展 标杆学习、主题论坛、沙龙交流等特色服务，为企业管理者、学员搭建一个多 样化的学习平台。易迪思每年服务客户超过 1000 家，每年开办的展示课、 公开课、内训课超过 8000 场次，其中包括 300 余家全球 500 强的在华投资企业。